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RED = words that can be omitted or changed. Green = sentences or phrases that need to be revised. ​Blue = incorrect form of the word Grey = misspelled Light Blue - Missing Punctuation Burgundy = run-on sentence Purple = incomplete sentence ​ Dark Blue = Information incorrect

__Of Mice and Men__

Erick, your essay is well written and eloquently worded. You have a sure talent for writing. I highlighted the word FORMIDALBE because the word already implies that George's actions were pure in intention. Your transitions are clear and effective. Be sure to clearly present the topic sentences of your body paragraphs in your introduction paragraph.